4. Conclusion: explain that you understand the opposite opinion, but overall you
believe that...
It's very important to get the introduction right. This shows the examiner whether you
are going to give one side of the argument or both sides.
Have a look at
the word "while".
A recent IELTS Writing Task 2 question was about the advantages and disadvantages
of private healthcare. Here are some ideas from my
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State Health Systems: Advantages
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Good healthcare should be available to everyone for free.
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State healthcare is paid by the government using money from taxes.
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Everyone has access to the same quality of care and treatment.
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Private healthcare is unfair because only wealthy people can afford it.
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The National Health Service in the UK provides free healthcare for every
resident. (use this as an example)
Private Healthcare: Advantages
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State hospitals are often very large and difficult to run.
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Private hospitals have shorter waiting lists for operations and appointments.
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Patients can benefit from faster treatment.
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Many people prefer to pay for more a personal service.
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Patients have their own room and more comfortable facilities.
Note:
You can use the advantages of state healthcare when discussing the disadvantages of
private healthcare.
In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will
this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken
to reduce the impact of aging populations.
Some advice:
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