WHICH OF THE FOLLOWING IS THE BEST REVISION OF SENTENCE 16
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Which of the following is the best revision of sentence 16?
A. He will sail across the Atlantic to Canada and then down to Florida and through the
Panama Canal then, will travel to Los Angeles, Honolulu, Tokyo around the tip of Africa,
and back to Holland.
B. He will sail across the Atlantic to Canada, and then down to Florida and through the
Panama Canal then will travel to Los Angeles Honolulu Tokyo around the tip of Africa, and
back to Holland.
C. He will sail across the Atlantic to Canada and then down to Florida and through the
Panama Canal then will travel to Los Angeles, Honolulu, Tokyo around the tip of Africa,
D. He will sail across the Atlantic to Canada, and then down to Florida and through the
Panama Canal, then he will travel to Los Angeles, Honolulu, Tokyo, around the tip of Africa,