THE ORIGINAL SENTENCE HAS A MISPLACEDPRESENT TENSE

11. d.The original sentence has a misplacedpresent tense. The last item,over 60% . . . were,modifier—the American Society of Civil Engi-is in the past tense. Choices band drepeat theneers is not one of the longest bridges in theworld. To correct the error,Golden Gate Bridgeerror. Choice ccorrects it, but adds an unnec-essarily wordy construction (there are three . . .needs to follow the modifier one of the longestbridges in the world. Choices band erepeat thethat).