EXERCISE 9. REVISE EACH OF THE SENTENCES BY MOVING A WORD OR WORDS BEF...

10. Soccer is a popular sport worldwide, and its popularity has increased in the United

States.

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Appositives

Use appositives to achieve conciseness and vary the sentence structure (see also

Lesson 25, page 203).

WITHOUT APPOSITIVES

: The eagle, which is the U.S. national symbol,

won out over the turkey, which was Benjamin

Franklin’s choice.

WITH APPOSITIVES

: The eagle, the U.S. national symbol, won out

over the turkey, Benjamin Franklin’s choice.

WITHOUT APPOSITIVES

: The medieval dinner plate was often a thick

slice of stale bread and was called a trencher.

WITH APPOSITIVES

: The medieval dinner plate, the trencher, was

often a thick slice of stale bread.