THE CORRECT ANSWER IS (E). ONE PROBLEM WITH THE ORIGINAL SENTENCE...

20. The correct answer is (E). One problem with the original sentence is that it makes

an illogical comparison, suggesting that a pluralistic democracy is not a system of

government, when in fact it is. The solution is to add other to the end of the underlined

phrase. A second problem with the original sentence is that in greater degree is not

idiomatic; to a greater degree would be the appropriate idiom here. Choice (E) corrects

the first error and avoids the second one by replacing in greater degree with the

answers

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